ok i've been working on writing a book but all of my past ideas were weak and sounded like soooo many other books i had read... and i've finally have come up with one thats unique all on its own!!!!!! Ok there's this girl...,lets call her lola,... well lola is being stalked by a vampire and a werewolf... well the only reason she is being stalked is because she gave off a siren call... now she did not know this.. a siren call is like a dog whistle, only the dog can hear it... well whats rare about her call is that both vamp and w.wolf could hear it... now i dont meal all vamps and all w.wolves can hear it... only certain ones can hear it... well most calls are to either just vamps or just w.wolves.. rarely to both... so these two fight over which gets to call lola theirs... they don't know that she is actually the almighty's daughter... the almighty is the highest athority... he can wipe out the entire universe... well the almighty didn't want to give up his throne... well its accustomed that if the almighty has a child then when the child gets married the child and its spouse become the almighty...well if the child is a boy its the almighty if the child is a girl then her husband is the almighty... so as you can see he doesn't want to give up his throne.. so he put her on earth and desguised her as a human... suprizingly the board...(the board is the people who make rules and give the almighty advice)...the board hasn't figured out that the almighty has had a child.... hmmmmmmm.... The whole plot of the story is that the almighty is devious and when the vamp & the werewolf hear the siren they automaticly get the mission of taking the almighty down!!!!
What do you think?????? Please leave me comments!!!!!!! I just need to know what you think!!!!! Do you understand what its about???? Is it just plain stupied?? Oh please just tell me up front what you think!!!! I won't be mad!!! I need some critizism on my idea to form my main plot... so please leave comments!!!!!